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BigBrother31, a 31-year-old man in Manhattan seeking a woman...

 

Before

Pssst...I know where all the good shoes sales are!!!!

To describe myself is difficult, as I would like to believe that I am still learning and evolving.

Ambitious and dedicated to my work as an Investment Manager for a financial service firm in downtown, I'm happy to admit work is not the only thing in life to me. I'm part of the Big Brother/Sister program, I've spent a total of four years working with several nine year old boys. I've also assisted in the construction of several low income homes. Why ?? ...It helps me keep a reasonable perspective on life. -----Love to hear from you, if you feel like there is a match...A passion for passion, at the right time and the right place. Looking for a girl who would know the moment when it came along;

 

After

Pssst...Wanna Hear About The Best Shoe Sale in New York?

The perfect date night? Dinner at an exotic restaurant in Manhattan – or, an evening at home cuddled on the couch with you, watching a Netflix movie. My dream date would go for either option, and is comfortable dressing up or dressing down, enjoying evenings on the couch, at the beach, or at the occasional black-tie event.

Balance in life is good, and I want to find someone who feels the same way. Even though I’m ambitious, and dedicated to my work as an investment manager for a financial service firm, I'm happy to admit work is not the only thing in life to me. I'm part of the Big Brother/Sister program, which helps me keep things in perspective.

How would we know if we’re meant to be together? I’d like to meet a girl who would know the moment when it came along, and who has a passion for, well, passion!

The Profile Professor says:

BigBrother31 is actually making an effort to talk about what kinds of dates he’ll take you on. But his effort needs to be organized, polished and focused. Some specific problems:

  • Sometimes, a question can be a lot more seductive than a statement. This headline is a perfect example.
  • Vague language: “the life of the mind and of the body.” What does that mean, exactly??
  • Too stream-of-consciousness. Even dating profiles need a narrative structure.
  • "To describe myself is difficult.” We know, but try anyway.

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